Paper 6

Wow this last paper is a lot harder than it seems. To correct your own work is really difficult. I think you see 2 ends of the sectrum and not a lot in between. You are either to easy on yourself or to hard. Personally I don't mind correcting other peoples papers. For this paper, I have to sit down and agonize through each sentence and paragraph. Its long and its difficult. I am having a little trouble figureing out where i am going to put my second paragraph. It deals indirectly with the thesis, so I am still figuring out what to do. Thats about it for now.